Love in the Time of Cholera Excerpt: The Detachment

“This is not the place for a crowned goddess.”

She turned her head and saw, a hand’s breadth from her eyes, those other glacial eyes, that livid face, those lips petrified with fear, just as she had seen them in the crowd at Midnight Mass the first time he was so close to her, but now, instead of the commotion of love, she felt the abyss of disenchantment. In an instant the magnitude of her own mistake was revealed to her, and she asked herself, appalled, how she could have nurtured such a chimera in her heart for so long and with so much ferocity. She just managed to think: My God, poor man!

Florentino Ariza smiled, tried to say something, tried to follow her, but she erased him from her life with a wave of her hand. “No, please,” she said to him. “Forget it.”

That afternoon, while her father was taking his siesta, she sent Gala Placidia with a two-line letter: “Today, when I saw you, I realized that what is between us is nothing more than an illusion.” The maid also returned his telegrams, his verses, his dry camellias, and asked him to send back her letters and gifts, Aunt Escolastica’s missal, the veins of leaves from her herbariums, the square centimeter of the habit of St. Peter Clavier, the saints’ medals, the braid of her fifteenth year tied with the silk ribbon of her school uniform.

In the days that followed, on the verge of madness, he wrote her countless desperate letters and besieged the maid to take them to her, but she obeyed her unequivocal instructions not to accept anything but the returned gifts. She insisted with so much zeal that Florentino Ariza sent them all back except the braid, which he would return only to Fermina Daza in person so they could talk, if just for a moment. But she refused.

Two days later, after an argument with his mother, Florentino Ariza took down from the wall of his room the stained-glass case where he displayed the braid as if it were a holy relic, and Transito Ariza herself returned it in the velvet box embroidered with gold thread.

Florentino Ariza never had another opportunity to see or to talk to Fermina Daza alone in the many chance encounters of their very long lives until fifty-one-years and nine months and four days later, when he repeated his vow of eternal fidelity and everlasting love on her first night as a widow.

Hi, Tiara is back! I am currently reading “Love in the Time of Cholera” by G. G. Marquez. So far the story fascinates me, albeit at first I felt hesitant that I could enjoy this story. The truth is, I do!

Still a lot to read but I want to give an honest thought right now:

The tale of Fermina Daza and Florentino Ariza seems intriguing because the feeling is mutual. I mean, let’s imagine what if Fermina didn’t love Florentino as well? The whole story would become so creepy. That being said, it’s sorta wrong to say: I wish someone would love me the way Florentino Ariza loves Fermina Daza”; it’s supposed to be:

I wish someone whom I’m in love with would love me the way Florentino Ariza loves Fermina Daza.



  1. Got this book on my shelf since…I don’t know, years perhaps. But remain untouched. XD I feel like Marquez’s style is a bit…gloomy? Maybe it’s just me. Looking forward for a complete review! :)

    1. I haven’t finished this yet but as far as I’m concerned, this one is not ‘that’ gloomy. (or maybe I just haven’t reached the gloomy part of it).
      Sure will do!! Thanks for stopping by! 😊😊

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